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True
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Saturday, 29th August 2015 @ 09:41:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I lie awake at night
Thinking of how it all went about
Torn apart by what is real
My life is nothing but shattered
Beaten and tattered by the lies you told
The truth yet revealed
Nothing from you is real
I want the truth to be known
The story to unfold
I'm tired of the heartache and pain
That comes from your disdain
The shadow of doubt
By the lies you threw about
A misspoken word
Can never resign
Unlike the sun in the sky
It shall never fade
The words you spoke
Play in my head
A song, a tune,
That's unknown
Let me live again
Set me free
To live another day
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2015-08-29 09:41:44]
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Re: True
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th August 2015 @ 04:34:38 PM AEST
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| Wow, you are very in touch with how the depressed mind works. I can relate to this. |
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Re: True
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th August 2015 @ 01:37:07 AM AEST
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sine, the ratio of an angle
opposite that which is the right angle of the longest side
in a triangle
a song a tune a person
a night awake torn apart
to be set free to live another day
i say screw it
with a helix and not a spiral
it's the only way
to ever find a free mind
just kidding,
you should shout it out
in free verse
so that it becomes a cloud
that floats away with the wind
Peace!
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Re: True
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 30th August 2015 @ 10:29:53 PM AEST
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Emotional torture warfare at it's best.....
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Re: True
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th September 2020 @ 06:28:53 AM AEST
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//// I know these tortured thoughts all too well but then you already know that.
Great poem!!!
Thank you,
Dugan
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