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Mirrors
Contributed by
AmiasDavies
on
Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 07:00:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A reflection of what we hope for,
One that feels like a door,
A feeling that we must roar,
A future that will never be in store.
A reflection of our upcoming,
One that keeps running,
A past that keeps mumbling,
A wish that keeps struggling.
A reflection of what went wrong,
Feelings that weren’t strong,
A bridge that was too long,
No one came to the dong.
A reflection of our sadness,
When we’re filled with madness,
A substitute for failing gladness,
All lit but it’s all blackness.
A reflection that we adulate,
With no need to calibrate,
And life will castigate,
In us we fabricate.
A reflection that will crack,
A future all in black,
A loss of track,
Payment for the choice to slack.
A reflection that leaves a gap,
Feelings that will always trap,
Angry that you will never snap,
A mirror that gave the slap.
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AmiasDavies
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Re: Mirrors
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Saturday, 29th August 2015 @ 02:47:39 AM AEST (User
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I like your poem for it is a reflection of your style and intensity |
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Re: Mirrors
(User Rating: 1 ) by FireStarter on
Monday, 31st August 2015 @ 02:04:12 AM AEST (User
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I really like any poetry on mirrors or reflections but yours takes the cake ^~^ good job |
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Re: Mirrors
(User Rating: 1 ) by CandyAnn on
Monday, 31st August 2015 @ 05:37:21 PM AEST (User
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Nice work. |
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