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Peace
Contributed by
AmiasDavies
on
Thursday, 27th August 2015 @ 06:30:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A goal with no finish,
The word starts to diminish,
And we have to refinish,
But there’s no time to replenish.
A goal with one meaning,
Harder to reach than the ceiling,
People keep intervening,
And hate keeps stealing.
A goal for the people,
To point like a steeple,
But there is no more diesel,
We’re equally evil.
A goal that has worth,
For the people on earth,
Since we were in birth,
It’s a tale of dearth.
A goal that is needed,
Words that are seeded,
The people conceded,
But the children have pleaded.
A goal that gets harder,
The more that we try the more it goes farther,
It’s hard for the smarter,
And for us it’s even harder.
A goal that must end,
A message we must send,
A time that we must spend,
A place to attend.
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AmiasDavies
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2015-08-27 18:30:37]
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Re: Peace
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by Archie on
Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 12:13:40 AM AEST
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| I love the style and meaning of this poem. This is inspiring to me. Are you reading my mind not two nights ago I was going to post a poem with this title. It needed to be reworked and edited. I like yours better. |
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Re: Peace
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 02:23:00 PM AEST
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A poem of hope, but a hope that the years deny. I admire your words and your thinking.
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Re: Peace
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th August 2015 @ 03:27:24 AM AEST
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I love this one. I was a kid pleading during the Vietnam War.
I still am all the time. Why not use it anytime.
I hold it first as high as any goal.
Really good writing!
Thanks!
Peace! |
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