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Serene
Contributed by
rickyml85
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Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
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As each day goes by I get more fainthearted,
I thought we were going to be together, evermore,
With all the obsticles I go through each day I felt tranquility with you,
I had it all planned, but I guess nothing works out the way you want them to,
Now all that matters is your happiness with or without me,
Nothing will make me happier than to see you fulfilling your destiny,
I was selfish keeping you all to myself,
I am so disoriented, only knowing my past not my future,
I need guidance, what am I doing here,
I am trying to ameliorate myself,
At the cost of losing the love of my life,
I don't know what to do anymore,
I am so alone right now,
Your life is pulling you in a million different directions,
Unfortunetly, none of them lead to me,
Pain and desolation is a part of life I guess,
But in the end I shall feel serene.
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Re: Serene
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:03:49 PM AEST
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i hope you feel better soon, this is a good write, keep it up:)
~hugs nessa
p.s. what is this word? "ameliorate" *too tired to get her dictionary* |
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Re: Serene
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 12:49:49 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem. It touches me. It seems that we are all going through similar things at this time. I hope that your feeling better soon.
Michelle |
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Re: Serene
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by rickyml85 on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 12:11:53 PM AEST
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Thanks for your comment, it is greatly appreciated. Ameliorate means to improve, better, reform.
Ricky |
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