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Cherry Blossom Butterfly
Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
on
Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 09:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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ugly duckling worm
cherry blossom = chrysalis
rainbow butterfly
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2015-08-22 09:19:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cherry Blossom Butterfly
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 01:44:15 PM AEST (User
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interesting write. I hope you win. |
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Re: Cherry Blossom Butterfly
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 10:44:48 PM AEST (User
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the viewed birth
birthed from old, free to death
color light flight for you
Yours is way better!
There's a lot to think in your hiaku, which is imperative
in such short verse.
I give you my vote!
Thanks for sharing!
Peace! |
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