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AMAZING:
Contributed by
richard_campbell
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Friday, 21st August 2015 @ 04:14:59 PM in AEST
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You are an amazing God,
and there is no other God like you.
No other God like you.
I declared it.(repeat three times)
There is no other God like you.
You are an amaizing GOD,
and there is no other God like you.
No other God like you.
We declared it(repeat3 times)
There is no other God like you.
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2015-08-21 16:14:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: AMAZING:
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 01:01:32 AM AEST (User
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A good start, but where is the rest of it?
"All of the rocks reach to the skies
All of the trees they raise their arms
Every peak and mountain high
Joins to worship him in song"
Excerpt from "Jesus is King"
Written by Archie Brown
Why do you praise? What has god done to inspire you? What do you declare?
The answer to these questions are missing in your poem. I like it but the spirit of it is somewhat lacking. |
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