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Two to Tango
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Wednesday, 19th August 2015 @ 07:38:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The leading hand brings fervent step,
Guiding legs, marionettes
Passion in the form of movement
An exquisite energetic precedent
Biological cameras transfixed
On every rotational axis
Smooth flow of to and fro,
Matching the grace of the routine
Gown fabric flutters, twirls,
Whilst suit, remains a solid tether
Source of extraordinary captured glance;
Wonderful motions, of two souls' dance
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Re: Two to Tango
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 19th August 2015 @ 09:43:55 AM AEST
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I think you did a great job.
After I read it I understood the byline.
Yes it is hard to describe.
You pulled it off well.
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Re: Two to Tango
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by Archie on
Thursday, 20th August 2015 @ 10:28:25 AM AEST
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I like this and can relate it to a song: Sam Cooke's 'You Send Me'
"At first I thought it might be infatuation
But ooh it's lasted so long, so long
Now I find my self wanting
wanting to marry you and take you home'
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Re: Two to Tango
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by softerware on
Thursday, 20th August 2015 @ 07:28:30 PM AEST
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Definitely enjoyed. Took it literally and saw two marionettes. One in taffeta and one in a black silk suit. Dancing of course! At the behest of the deft hands of the puppeteer.
The analogy is that we all dance to the hands of the puppeteer we chose to give our life over to. And as graceful as the dance may be; it will never again be our own.
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Re: Two to Tango
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 02:10:16 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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