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Parallel Lines
Contributed by
starkindler
on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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He was looking for her
He would go straight around the world
Around and around
And around
Until he found her
She was looking for him
She would go straight around the world
Around and around
And around
Until she found him
I imagine despair
As two straight lines
Who will forever
Continue to search
For each other
But
Will
Never
Meet.
Copyright ©
starkindler
... [
2003-05-28 18:05:00]
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Re: Parallel Lines
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 08:05:10 PM AEST
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good write
Shari |
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Re: Parallel Lines
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 03:03:29 PM AEST
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very clever!
x_x_x |
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Re: Parallel Lines
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by tease_whizz on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:01:29 PM AEST
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| i love this - the concept is very effective. i just submitted a poem called 'underground and parallel' that you might like, it works on the same sort of basis. great poem, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Parallel Lines
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by Sexygirl on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:16:12 PM AEST
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| That is so true...well done... |
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