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to my Goddess
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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like an aura of starlight
you stand, defiant, at the heart of midnight
in Winter's dress, you still glow with warmth
your lips giving life to the roses
like the sea, so deep and full of mystery
helplessly, i'm drawn to you
a bipolar Goddess, both benign and malignant
even Death at your hands would feel like a kiss
at your breast, i've found heaven
your arms around me, never letting me fall
above it all you soar, bewitching, irresistible
with a heart too pure for this world
beneath you i crawl, an insect
praying for the blessing of Death
'neath your perfumed foot
painting your dark rainbow of love
across the moonlit sky
and i will always chase that rainbow
ever hoping to kiss those lips once more
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-05-28 18:05:00]
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Re: to my Goddess
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 08:07:02 PM AEST
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very beautiful.. I like this softer side
Shari |
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Re: to my Goddess
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:22:35 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful.. very beautiful.. venkat |
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Re: to my Goddess
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:22:46 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful.. very beautiful.. venkat |
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Re: to my Goddess
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 01:58:59 PM AEST
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| if this is 'getting soft', then i wish more guys would feel this way. this write has all the beautiful imagery that make your darker poems so intense and the emotions revealed seem genuine and are eloquently expressed. she sounds perfect, surely you've found your reason to live? keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: to my Goddess
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:11:09 PM AEST
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I liked this Roy just as great as your 'morbid' ones very descriptive I especially liked the last stanza. once again great.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: to my Goddess
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 08:50:57 PM AEST
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| i love both sides of your heart.......tender ........beautiful......dark and hateful.........awesome talent!!!!!!!! |
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