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Insane Asylum

Contributed by blknwht on Saturday, 15th August 2015 @ 12:50:18 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Sitting in the dark
I hear voices in my head
Saying help is on the way
You are not yet dead

As I try to move my arms
I can feel they're tied up tight
What seems to be a stray jacket
Have I worn this all my life?

I try to scream out load
But something is not right
For theres something in my mouth
My lips are wired tight

Wishing I could see some light
To understand where I am
Wishing someone would come to me
Take me by the hand

But my legs are currently working
And for the moment that seems great
Until I try to stand
I guess Ill have to wait

For my feet are tied together
And they are tied up tight
I just can't seem to break the chains
Even with all my might

I start to roll around
To find what I can feel
A padded wall I rolled into
Is this really for real?

All the sudden a blistering light
Comes on above my head
What seems to be a Doctor
Walked up to me and said,

"Why hello there Mr. Asdney
How are you doing today?
Have you freed yourself from your mind?
Or do you wish to stay?"

As he took out the syringe
He had a smile on his face
Said "this should calm you down
and put you in your place."

As I felt the drugs take effect
I lay there with a stare
My whole body became so numb
In my mind I was so scared

He opened up my chart
And looked through it really close
Said "This guy is a schizo
We should really up the dose

On the back wall I can see
A sign that is painted black
"They now have checked you in
You never can go back"




Copyright © blknwht ... [ 2015-08-15 00:50:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Insane Asylum (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Sunday, 16th August 2015 @ 11:19:16 AM AEST
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Have you freed yourself from your mind
Or do you wish to stay?

I love that part! I love the whole poem to be exact. I think its great


Re: Insane Asylum (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 01:05:45 AM AEST
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Nice!! Very deep and filled with truth!!!
keep writing and sharing
forever!!!
Keep poetry alive in this world!!
Peace
$tr8 $av




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