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Contributed by
FireStarter
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Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 01:18:48 AM in AEST
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This is a place where you should feel safe and loved
Not a place where you should scream to above
A place where angels lie in waiting
Not a place for self medicating
To count on parents to do the right things
Not a place for them to get violent and show their fangs
To have a warm, comfy bed
Not to take lithium & valium to rest your head
To have a strong family structure
Not to have it blow up in your face, thus rupture
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Re: Home
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 12:27:38 AM AEST
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i like the structure of this poem, every other line
positive/negative, two totally different poems/two totally
diff meanings if read every other line, excellent images,
beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Home
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 12:46:40 PM AEST
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Amen to that! Wish it were so. If home is as you describe, then get the hell out and build your own. Sounds like it's a house with people in it, not a 'home'. Only happiness and security can make a house a home, not simply living within its confines.
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