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This Is...
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 12:22:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Inner Visions flow through my mind,
I can't stop thinking about
what am now
and
what I couldn't be...
and all this searching
for the meaning of life
inhibits my transforming
into a beautiful human being.
In the real world I am in chains
it's so insane
to live tortured emotionally,
I no longer sleep at night
because the reality
is
I know something is missing.
Forever Broken down
tears drip oh so slowly
deep
into my mind,
this is my world
this is...
my life.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2015-08-13 00:22:50]
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Re: This Is...
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 09:59:03 PM AEST
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Great poem.
Full on angst the way I like them.
Bravo
James |
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Re: This Is...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th August 2015 @ 11:27:23 AM AEST
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Wow. So sad, yet smooth flowing great writing!
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: This Is...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th August 2015 @ 11:28:08 AM AEST
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| I meant to add, this is...impressive. |
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Re: This Is...
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th August 2015 @ 12:36:21 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings!
hugs n' love nessa |
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