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ALONE, I WALK
Contributed by
hray42
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Tuesday, 11th August 2015 @ 01:34:26 PM in AEST
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alone, i walk
i walk down the long and narrow pathways
i walk into the darkest nights, and into the rain
i walk, and i feel no pain...
alone, i walk
i walk where others dare not follow, and will not
i walk against the giant winds, and i feel their blow
i walk where most hearts should not go...
alone, i walk
i walk the bridges over days gone by
i walk the ground that my feet may find
i walk with peaceful thoughts in my peaceful mind...
alone, i walk
i walk in search of you around each and every bend
i walk under the reflections of the sun, and of the sky
i will walk until i find you, or until the day i die...
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Re: ALONE, I WALK
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 12th August 2015 @ 03:34:40 AM AEST
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In days gone by I used to walk begging for someone to get in my way. Beaten down by life and much to lose but to blinded by life to understand.
I would never chase a woman until I die however.
A life lesson you learn the hard way.
Great write indeed. Stirs up much emotion.
Bravo
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Re: ALONE, I WALK
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by FireStarter on
Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 01:07:56 AM AEST
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| Alot of people can relate to this, chasing something and never giving up |
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Re: ALONE, I WALK
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 04:26:46 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this write. so much truth in it. always searching for something...even facing our biggest fears and searching those places "where most hearts should not go." only to come out of the other side empty handed once again...it's the motivation of hope that helps us to push on and keep going each and every time.. |
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Re: ALONE, I WALK
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by Archie on
Sunday, 23rd August 2015 @ 08:57:44 PM AEST
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| Your poem reminds me of the poem I wrote called 'I walk alone' Your style is solid. |
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Re: ALONE, I WALK
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th June 2016 @ 03:59:32 PM AEST
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| wow - yeah I think I found your shoes and can/'/t get them off my own feet |
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