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Choosing Fate
Contributed by
SeXyDrAgOn
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Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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They sped through the busy streets
Chancing murder and death
Dodging the police, and on coming traffic
Risking their very last breaths
And when the inevitable crash came
And someone chose their fate
While others came out injured
The offenders lived that day
So away they went, the roads safe again
Young offenders they were, did no time
Small punsihments, slap on the wrist
Maybe probabtion, a $5000 fine
And then there was my best friend
Who was just having a night away
They didn't do anything wrong
Sober, law abiding, coming home that day
And when the other two passengers climbed out
They couldn't save him, he died
His life was slowly taken away from him
Upside down, in front of their eyes
Copyright ©
SeXyDrAgOn
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2003-05-28 15:35:00]
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Re: Choosing Fate
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 03:59:39 PM AEST
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| im so sorry for your loss, there isn't a reason to me either, why i lost people in accidents, as long as your friend is held within' your heart, always they will live, ~hugs n' love to you, nessa |
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Re: Choosing Fate
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by Clown_Prince on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:01:28 PM AEST
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| Wow. That is sad. *sighs* Well, I'm really sorry that you had to go through with that, and that your friend had to go through with that. This was a good poem. Hope you can cope with your loss. |
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Re: Choosing Fate
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by Ember on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:43:41 PM AEST
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| wow that makes ya stop and think how careless people can be sorry for your loss |
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Re: Choosing Fate
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 08:18:29 PM AEST
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very sad,, there is no reason to so much of life,, as long as you remember them they will always be with you
Shari |
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Re: Choosing Fate
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by InteruptedFate on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 02:24:13 PM AEST
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| wow, lots of depth |
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