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To Be Me
Contributed by
shereal_14
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Wednesday, 5th August 2015 @ 10:05:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The things that I feel
Emotions that are real
Causing agonizing pain
No love shall I gain.
The burden of regret
Guilty feelings go unchecked
I leave disaster in my wake
While I try to not be fake.
I feel so alone
And it chills me to the bone
A broken heart
A shattered soul
They're all I have left to call my own
Until the day comes when the good Lord calls me home.
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2015-08-05 22:05:19]
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Re: To Be Me
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 6th August 2015 @ 05:05:49 AM AEST
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I wrote a few like this myself. Well done!!!!!!!!!
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Re: To Be Me
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by CandyAnn on
Saturday, 8th August 2015 @ 12:45:53 AM AEST
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| Almost sounds like my writing, very nice work! |
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Re: To Be Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th August 2015 @ 11:39:50 PM AEST
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come back to me
or is it me come home
from where I must have left
I love this magnification
of self doubt
which evokes such dread
which must be expressed
even as though no one
might be listening
It reminds me a bit
of myself
who could ever compare
their love next to another love
when it is not love
you reached out and pulled me in
Thank you!
Peace! |
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Re: To Be Me
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by FireStarter on
Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 01:22:07 AM AEST
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| Beautiful |
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Re: To Be Me
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 21st August 2015 @ 06:34:14 PM AEST
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Lifes struggle told directly and succinctly.
Pain poured out for the world to see.
Nice write
Steve
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