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all of this
Contributed by
Jigget
on
Wednesday, 5th August 2015 @ 04:18:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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all of this
so hard to subdue
this unthought you
this shadow bright
this backwards new
this forced unfocus
this blood-stained screw
this crude rendition
this twisted true
so hard to survive
this blasted hive
this bleached eyeball
this deadly thrive
this fancy disaster
this depraved deprive
this obviously wrong
this pretend alive
so hard to surrender
this endless wait
this monster want
this clueless hate
this dark supernova
this standard fate
this fast unwinding
this thorn bent straight
Joshua David Howell
aug-02, 2015
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Jigget
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2015-08-05 04:18:31]
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Re: all of this
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 8th August 2015 @ 01:53:39 PM AEST
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What i see in it, since you asked.
recovery and desire for a return.
the questioning of whether it's worth it.
is life without it better, or worse.
to run from or hide from the hearse.
Invierno |
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Re: all of this
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by speedy on
Sunday, 9th August 2015 @ 09:19:54 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: all of this
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by Archie on
Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 11:35:30 PM AEST
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| I like it. For me it is the start of a song about seeing God's perspective. You have a very pleasing style. |
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