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the power of the angels
Contributed by
gothgal
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Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A tear falls down from heaven,
and lands upon my face,
an invisable hold around my heart,
warming the bitter empty space.
The sun pushes through the clouds,
and forces a smile upon my lips,
as i stand there in the warmest rain,
dripping softly onto my fingertips.
A rainbow developes in the grim grey sky,
Bringing joy to my oh so sad heart,
a painting done by the angels above,
the most marvelous and greatest of art.
the wonder of earth all around me,
and the wonders of god up above,
bringing a present from all those angels,
a present so great,its love.
by Shelley Trickett
Copyright ©
gothgal
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2003-05-28 14:05:00]
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Re: the power of the angels
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:26:15 PM AEST
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| this is very beautiful... touching... blessings... |
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Re: the power of the angels
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by Rage on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:35:56 PM AEST
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Wow, wonderfully done. Beautiful string of words you've pulled here. I'm taken away by the beauty you've created here. Very well done.
Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: the power of the angels
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:08:10 PM AEST
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| beautiful... |
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Re: the power of the angels
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by Ember on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:54:28 PM AEST
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another great write by you keep it up
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Re: the power of the angels
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 08:31:10 PM AEST
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very beautiful
Shari |
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Re: the power of the angels
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:55:47 PM AEST
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Shelly sad but a beautiful poem,I lost my mother 2 years ago the pains still there!
Very touching! Christina |
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Re: the power of the angels
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 05:40:15 AM AEST
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Aw that's really touching! I'm very sorry for your loss. Beautiful poem. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit |
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Re: the power of the angels
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by gothgal on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:05:48 PM AEST
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| hi,just thought i would say thanks to all of you that took the time to not only read but post a comment aswell about my poem.its nice to feel that peple can associate to my poem and my feelings..thankyou :) |
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