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Face
Contributed by
senates
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Saturday, 1st August 2015 @ 03:08:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Believing the veil.
Hollow tree,
Dense as can be,
Dismantling to no avail,
Uncomfortably sublime.
Doubt the walls that surround,
When a hand reaches out,
Take one...
You might find a corpse.
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Re: Face
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by speedy on
Saturday, 1st August 2015 @ 03:34:18 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: Face
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 2nd August 2015 @ 01:05:09 AM AEST
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I gotta think about this one. The first line is excellent; I just need to catch the relevance below.
Good job here.
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