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DRAGONFLIES
Contributed by
hray42
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Monday, 20th July 2015 @ 06:30:16 PM in AEST
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might those dragonflies appear to me tonight?
and will they take me on another flight?
over the moon, beyond the planets,
and past our sun...
a voyage to a distant star again?
over and over, further and further,
in a soaring spin...
might they pick me up gently as they do?
take me far away to some place new?
race by comets as we go
match their speed, then speed right through...
they'll apply the magic that they know,
oh, how i hope so...
might the butterflies whisper in my ear?
to tell me that those dragonflies are here
have me pack my bags full this time,
enough to last an earthen year...
oh, how i hope so...
i shall stroll out over the horizon to look for them
for i most enjoy that soaring spin...
i will leave now, and search then
sincerely, your's truly, the end...
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Re: DRAGONFLIES
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 20th July 2015 @ 06:32:06 PM AEST
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This rolls right along. Beautifully written.
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Re: DRAGONFLIES
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 08:44:42 AM AEST
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Beautifully written and has a very comforting tone and flow. Great work and thanks for sharing.
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Re: DRAGONFLIES
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 03:49:40 PM AEST
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brilliant love of nature,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: DRAGONFLIES
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 03:59:58 PM AEST
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Sounds extremely peaceful.
Great write.
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Re: DRAGONFLIES
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th July 2015 @ 10:31:17 PM AEST
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Such a strange flyinng creature as the Dragon fly has always made me wonder about such things
This is very cool
I think that if you can find a way to make yourself very very small at just the right time when a Dragon Fly hovers
Zip into the Cargo Bay you go
Soon you meet others just like you
There is a lot of amazing things to see out of all those windows
Maybe you'll even get a chance to drive...
You can only drive very far off into space when you know you're
Really really small
Excellent write!
Peace!
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Re: DRAGONFLIES
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 04:40:36 PM AEST
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| you made me wish I could set out on a great adventure with this..made me want to pack a bag myself and just try to follow the next dragonfly I see. but as my luck always falls I would get lost or distracted and never find my dragonfly again...a magical write. thank you. |
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