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the host
Contributed by
gfour
on
Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 04:13:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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mesmerized
by the serpent's bite
he opts to sacrifice
life
evading
sorrow entwined with
gross purposeful neglect
and dismay.
frozen arteries
reserved for
clinical escape
from imprisonment
destroy boundaries
shredding the laws of love
the act of passion has no
tender after-touch
eroding the river bed
to dust
Copyright ©
gfour
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2015-07-19 04:13:35]
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Re: the host
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 04:45:03 AM AEST
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tragic is this host but
more tragic is lecherous
parasite which destroys the host
stone cold beyond understanding
Tragic write that sadly rings
truth.
very easily understood, well written.
The host I know could be me, or someone
I dearly love.
Thank you for this perfect poem!
Peace!
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Re: the host
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 09:00:41 AM AEST
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A most excellent capture of a painful reality so many experience; as have I.
Please keep writing- you have a talent of simplicity and stripping the frill to get to meat of the matter.
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Re: the host
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by speedy on
Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 01:46:10 PM AEST
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Good write.
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Re: the host
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 08:51:46 AM AEST
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Blunt and to the point. Very well written and how very true. Thank you for sharing.
Rich
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