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My New Wall
Contributed by
invierno
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Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 07:16:07 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I/'/ll be good for goodness sake,
pretending Goodness cares at all,
and the time I/'/ve spent so lost in thought
painting mental murals on empty walls,
and the times my pen has gathered dust,
from emotions spent and paid and bought,
have brought me back to me in spite of all
to paint new pictures on my new wall.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2015-07-17 19:16:07]
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Re: My New Wall
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 07:38:17 PM AEST
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| Yes sir. I'm going to read this one a few times. I like this one, I wish the administration had a way of bookmarking certain poems. Excellent write |
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Re: My New Wall
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by softerware on
Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 08:34:33 PM AEST
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"Painting mental murals on an empty wall.."
What a powerful statement.
Writing with the imagination!
It is the wanderings of the mind that bring us back to "paint new pictures".
Or is it those same wanderings that led us astray in the first place?
The brain wanders and the body follows. Therefore, safer by far to have a nightmare than a daydream!
In my case, the blank wall has endless possibilities--the painted wall is the end of creativity. |
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Re: My New Wall
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by irisblue on
Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 10:36:00 PM AEST
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| I love this! |
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Re: My New Wall
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by speedy on
Saturday, 18th July 2015 @ 07:31:57 AM AEST
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Exactly. Since everyone has a different perspective, it's like having a bunch of unique pictures to look at - like everyone's story made into pictures.
I like this one. Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: My New Wall
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 18th July 2015 @ 10:33:17 AM AEST
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Great flow. I love the voice here.
~Scorp |
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Re: My New Wall
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by duff on
Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 09:32:14 AM AEST
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It's so true that life is an evolving piece of art that has so many layers to it. A beautiful collection of memories and experiences. You've captured a bit of magic here and it was fun to read.
Great job
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Re: My New Wall
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th July 2015 @ 11:05:18 PM AEST
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Murals are only truly painted when the wall is worth saving
They those murals tell others a story
About why
Peace! |
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Re: My New Wall
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by softerware on
Saturday, 1st August 2015 @ 08:01:40 PM AEST
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No matter how far we travel, we end up with ourselves!
I like the journey from"painting mental murals on an empty wall" to coming back to
"Paint new pictures on my new wall"
Sometimes getting away from ourselves makes us appreciate what we have; like coming home after a vacation to the old familiar place. To paint again on a new wall!
softerware
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