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those dresses
Contributed by
boobies
on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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he says he's backwards
but he kills forward
and lives nine lives
in full throttle
three-sixty
and here we are
we've come undone
became a victim
of the things he's done
how does she keep it down
so well? when the
water on tap is hotter
than hell and burns
like iodine
in your famous cut
till we're done, we let
the blood run
then Beverly said
she was a man
because he's got it
all and she says
"doesn't every man, honey?"
he'll keep her in the kitchen
till she tires and says
"it's over" and is this
how true fairy tales
begin and end?
she was in distress
oh how he rescues the
woman divine
but she hates him
she could've saved herself
and if she does
she still wears her pretty dress
they said "it's
the law" every
man makes the law
because it's easier that way
those dresses
you can lift 'em up girl,
it's easier that way
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Re: those dresses
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:32:00 AM AEST
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| your poems may not make any sense, but it made perfect sense to me... in the tradition of david lynch films... i'd say we have a winner here... excellent imagery... and the end just hit the nail on the head... kudos... blessings... |
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Re: those dresses
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by Chuckx on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 01:06:44 PM AEST
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| It might not make sense to you, but it hits the senses right in the POW! love the finish! I hope you continue to touch senses, don't worry 'bout if it makes sense. |
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Re: those dresses
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 01:10:30 PM AEST
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abstract but very interesting over all a very good write
Shari |
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