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ECLIPSE
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You looked up at the same moon.
Our eyes beheld it’s light.
Though many miles between us,
Our hearts still joined that night.
I knew at that pure moment,
Our sight crossed paths in flight.
I could feel my feelings soaring,
My love for you gained new heights.
Then once again in your presence
I saw you gaze toward the stars.
The moon was shining brightly,
And in the distance there was Mars.
In the vastness of this splendor,
My eyes were frozen on you.
My universe stood in front of me.
My treasure stood there too.
Whenever I see an eclipse,
Or a full moon or blue sky.
I see your vision standing there
As the apple of my eye!
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…
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Re: ECLIPSE
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:46:10 AM AEST
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beautiful romantic lovely
shari |
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Re: ECLIPSE
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:28:58 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful... just beautiful... blessings... |
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Re: ECLIPSE
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by Chuckx on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 01:01:37 PM AEST
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| I was gazin' Good poem. |
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Re: ECLIPSE
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 09:54:40 PM AEST
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| dear robert, an exellent write as always is your poetry, this one is very romantic and espescially lovely too:) ~hugs n' love nessa |
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