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Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 08:50:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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wrapped
in wary
delicate
words
as quiet
as cobwebs
summoned
from dreams
my scary
mind
life
is a
trap
of stolen
poems
or however
Poets see
their lies
through a
distant lens
scattering infinity
as storm tossed
fear.
Copyright ©
ming
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2015-07-11 20:50:30]
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Re: follow me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 11:10:00 PM AEST
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wow, this great !!!
Kierkegaard in fear and trembling focused
on the story of Abraham
It's a pure poetry you who envision
this thought
of what was, what is, and what is to become
And it's selfless as well as individualistic
like the roots of a redwood forest which
allow trees to live thousands of years. or even
after, when just a few drop down into the soil
a new birth
Great Poem!
Peace!
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Re: follow me
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by duff on
Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 12:47:44 AM AEST
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I have always enjoyed how your writing can stir the mind and it' grabs your attention to the maximum in this piece. The lines are silky that flow without abandon and the rebel is well represented.
Awesome job Ming
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Re: follow me
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by elle on
Monday, 13th July 2015 @ 08:00:13 AM AEST
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| as always. . . I love your words. . . |
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