|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
pause
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 12:41:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
|
you should always go after them. . .
that's where it all messes up
too much pain.
too much sadness.
alone. . .
'til
everything
is
alright
again
somehow
. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2015-07-11 12:41:05]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: pause
(User Rating: 1 )
by ming on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 08:01:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Ouch. Miss you.
ming |
|
|
Re: pause
(User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 09:03:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great write.
Hannah B |
|
|
Re: pause
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 02:00:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
you can catch the meaning in this poem
easily if you have ever lived, loved
and felt like you couldn't make much
of a difference.
It's perfectly written!
Peace!
|
|
|
Re: pause
(User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 25th July 2015 @ 04:41:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Can't fault you for this one.
Short and to the point, yet seeming so effortless.
Great write
Steve |
|
|
Re: pause
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th August 2015 @ 12:22:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Exactly. :) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
