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Hey You

Contributed by Beyfoxman5 on Monday, 6th July 2015 @ 05:58:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Hey man
Hey man
What's that I see?
Is it you or some stand in?

Don't hide
Don't hide
Hide I see
What I already knew

Hey you
Hey you
Quit smiling at me
It's you I can see right through

I'm gonna leave
Leave
Go far from here
find some place true

Your words
Words
Don't mean a thing
Here I tell the truth

There was a man
Man
Lived around here
World swayed as he walked

And the people
People
Patronized him
And his anger grew

Hey you
Hey you
Quit smiling at me
It's you I can see right through

I'm gonna leave
Leave
Go far from here
And find some place true

Your words
Words
Don't mean a thing
Here I tell the truth

And he saw
Saw
Just what it was
That he had to do

He did not
Not
Crack or explode
He just emptied his heavy load

Hey you
Hey you
Quit smiling at me
It's you I can see right through

I'm gonna leave
Leave
Go far from here
And find some place true

Your words
Words
Don't mean a thing
Here I tell the truth

Copyright Â© Beyfoxman5 ... [ 2015-07-06 17:58:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hey You (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 6th July 2015 @ 09:36:37 PM AEST
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Great Job!
James

Re: Hey You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th July 2015 @ 01:30:10 AM AEST
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Too cool! As I was reading I had this tune going on in my head. Free flowin'!

Re: Hey You (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Wednesday, 8th July 2015 @ 11:58:29 AM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

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