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Just one of those days
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 04:40:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Solitary bitter hound
Blinded over years
Skin plagued by discomfort
And thus left to nip at imaginary flies
Cold winds and striking blows
Ailed by limitations
Learning how to survive,
But at the cost of how to feel alive
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xHeathenx
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2015-06-27 16:40:56]
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Re: Just one of those days
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 07:55:54 PM AEST
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This is fantastic. That last line is the clincher. Great job.
Hope your day improves.
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Re: Just one of those days
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 03:16:46 AM AEST
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a poem that breathes!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Just one of those days
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 6th July 2015 @ 10:45:49 AM AEST
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A poem that one can relate to whether the ailment is physical or emotional. Great work. Keep it up.
Rich |
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Re: Just one of those days
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 06:42:47 AM AEST
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Very sad and beautifully written.
A few words that created a big image.
Splendid!
James |
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Re: Just one of those days
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by Archie on
Thursday, 16th July 2015 @ 02:11:05 PM AEST
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I can definitely relate to this poem. This is how I feel when I am at work.
This poem strikes a chord with me. |
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