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LIKES AND DISLIKES
Contributed by
nk503
on
Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 05:23:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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I LIKE TINY FLOWERS
I LOVE APRIL SHOWERS
BUT I DISLIKE SLIMY TOADS
AND I DETEST BUMPY ROADS !
CUTE ARE LITTLE GOLDFISH
AND I WOULDN’T SAY NO TO A YUMMY DISH
BUT NOBODY LIKES GREAT BIG FROGS
AND EVERYONE HATES BIG FAT HOGS !
MY FRIEND LOVES CHICKEN
AND I LIKE TO HELP IN THE KITCHEN
BUT NO ONE LIKES A NEWT
AND STINKY FEET ARE NOT AT ALL CUTE !
EVERYONE HAS LIKES
AND DISLIKES TOO
THESE ARE MOST OF MINE
WHAT ABOUT YOU ?
Copyright ©
nk503
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2015-06-27 05:23:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: LIKES AND DISLIKES
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 12:01:06 PM AEST (User
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Cute. Nicely done, except for the all caps. Gonna take a guess ... you're quite young.
One of my dislikes is typing in all caps. Do you realize on the internet it's considered yelling? I also think it makes it harder to read. It is your poetry though, so write as you wish.
Keepa writin' and to YPDC.
Tim
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Re: LIKES AND DISLIKES
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 01:59:38 PM AEST (User
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warm welcome to ypdc, this is very sweet and cute:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: LIKES AND DISLIKES
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 04:46:56 PM AEST (User
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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