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Son Of God
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 01:04:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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He's the Son of God and he was the greatest man who ever lived.
He's compassionate and he has always been willing to forgive.
He's the Son of God and his blood was collected in the Holy Grail.
Jesus died for Mankind's sins, he died so that we won't go to Hell.
He's the Son of God and his death brought a lot of tears.
They nailed him to the cross and impaled him with a spear.
He's the Son of God and in certain Bibles, his words appear in red.
He was in agony as he was crucified and then sadly, he was dead.
He's the Son of God and he rose from his tomb after he died.
They couldn't end Christ's existence even though they tried.
He's the Son of God and he could resurrect the dead and make the blind see.
Because he's so wonderful, he means a lot to you and he means a lot to me.
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Re: Son Of God
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 01:49:27 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write and your words couldn't be truer.
Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more.
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Re: Son Of God
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 10:16:36 PM AEST
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I'm not religious, so the point of this poem is lost on me, but all the power to you for writing it.
The subject I won't comment on, because that's not for here.
The writing, not bad. Decent use of the rhyme scheme and some lengthy lines that follow the flow in good structure.
Props. :) |
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