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This Little Haiku
Contributed by
Ambivalence
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Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 01:03:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Though my words are true,
this little haiku can't prove
how much I love you!
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Ambivalence
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2015-06-26 13:03:50]
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Re: This Little Haiku
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by Kimmy79 on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 01:46:24 PM AEST
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| Awww..cute💝 |
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Re: This Little Haiku
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 04:02:25 PM AEST
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beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: This Little Haiku
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 10:20:00 PM AEST
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I'm thinking cute sentiment, it's sentiment. I would like to see at least 1-3 stanzas before which, so that way the "though my words are true" line would carry some more weight.
Not bad though. :) |
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Re: This Little Haiku
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by speedy on
Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 08:15:43 AM AEST
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I can relate. Very cute.
Great write.
Hannah B |
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