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The 2 of us.
Contributed by
Kimmy79
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Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 12:32:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The darker side of him
Was a beast he couldn't tame
He invited me into a world
Of pleasure and pain
It was a place I always wanted to go
My heart said yes
My head said no.
He can resist everything
Except temptation
And this world of fantasy
became our salvation
Just the 2 of us
With our bodies to explore
When the whip kissed my skin
I only pleaded him for more.
In my deepest desires
This was the place I
Always wanted to visit
He was my dominant
I was his submissive
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Kimmy79
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2015-06-26 12:32:48]
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Re: The 2 of us.
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 10:27:30 PM AEST
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Perhaps it's a sort of gender role or something, but I feel myself associatin more with the guy here. Having the control over somebody else for that moment is certainly a great time. Lol
But when it comes to bondage and sadism/masochism, I don't feel that part so much. I'm not sure if you do at all Kimmy, but I noticed it's the second writing I've seen of yours and noticed, nor do I know if this any sort of soulful representation of your own relationship, but I want to learn more a out this; This mentality. On both sides, considering both must have some reason to enjoy it.
Nicely written though. A nice flow, tintillated with a dark yet alluring tone. :) |
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Re: The 2 of us.
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 06:45:18 AM AEST
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Very well written!
Its easy to find abuse in this world :) |
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