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Transit
Contributed by
spike
on
Thursday, 25th June 2015 @ 07:10:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I get a sunrise
and sunset:
100,000 heartbeats
and 20,000 breaths
over 1400 minutes
in a 24 hour day
a dawn starts it all,
and dusk takes it away
breakfast and a coffee,
then strangers on a train
hoping that the new day
will not be so mundane
the dull routine of work,
not every target met
a splash of final colour,
then a moment of regret
a brief somnolescence
after TV and wine:
reflecting on the day
just seems a waste of time
a book for solitude,
tears, soft and wet
and a sunset till sunrise,
is sometimes all you get.
Copyright ©
spike
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2015-06-25 07:10:48]
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Re: Transit
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th June 2015 @ 07:46:19 AM AEST
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I've been there and felt that.
The key is finding the beauty and utility in the mundane!
Great write!
Cheers,
Mickey |
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Re: Transit
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 03:55:39 PM AEST
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wow spike! this is exquisite and sooo beautiful!
it is always such a great pleasure to read you,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Transit
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by speedy on
Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 08:11:48 AM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Transit
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 06:47:18 AM AEST
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I dig it.
Really well formed and written
5*
James |
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Re: Transit
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 11:25:20 AM AEST
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and I thought it was just me
who thought everyday is the same,
there is a ripple in the matrix..... |
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