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untitled
Contributed by
AliceLiddle
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Monday, 22nd June 2015 @ 01:48:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have started searching buses for your face,
even though i know well you don't pass this place.
Every time i begin to give up hope,
you're back and pushing me down that god dammed slope.
Into a whirlwind of emotion,
my mind screaming out the preposterous notion,
that I, am in love with you.
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AliceLiddle
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2015-06-22 13:48:29]
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Re: untitled
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by speedy on
Monday, 22nd June 2015 @ 06:11:06 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: untitled
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by cathartic on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2015 @ 12:00:45 AM AEST
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| I like the direction it's going. Searching for a familiar face in places unfamiliar to them. It's a sure sign of love and madness on your part. Keep writing! |
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Re: untitled
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 02:04:41 PM AEST
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warm welcome to ypdc, ...it can be taken two ways, one
you have not yet met, and second- you have met and
you see him everywhere, i'd love to see more from you,
keep writing:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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