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The Beautiful World of Eyes
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Monday, 22nd June 2015 @ 07:54:09 AM in AEST
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There was a circle
That gained a mind
A central core
That soon became afraid
The circle then became suspicious
Of all that were surrounding
It then became a sphere
To be wary of all dimensions
The sphere grew restless,
Unsure as to its health
Were it plagued,
It was unable to tell
And so it brought forth eyes
That rose from the dark
That saw light form
In a world that once had none
These eyes, while capable of sight
Knew not what it was they saw
And provided no answer
For the base question of the plight
And then the eyes gained minds
Continuing the quest of answers
They learned nothing of the sort
But provided the sphere with insight
The sphere then learned beauty
From the informative words
Of the eyes it knew and loved
Who had now set their sights above
Together they developed reason
Answers to questions
That even the sphere had n'er asked
An astonishing lesson of perception
And so thanks to these eyes,
The sphere had gained a sense of sight
Vicariously developed
From the colorful words of eyes
Its favorite tale
Was the one of the stars
Delightful glowing orbs
Glistening in silent calls
Soon the sphere reached out
And pulled in the source of its dreams
The shining beacon of hope
Mysterious perfection
But the arrival was unexpectedly serene
There fell a shower of rock and fire
A bombardment of the sphere
And thus it was wiped clean
The sphere then had learned a lesson, one of its own design
To love the eyes it had made, and not the dreams they help it see
And so while the sphere, may have become blind
It will not be forever, for some eyes will now soon be
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Re: The Beautiful World of Eyes
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by speedy on
Monday, 22nd June 2015 @ 06:07:11 PM AEST
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Good write.
Hannah B |
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Re: The Beautiful World of Eyes
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by Elisabeth on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2015 @ 03:01:18 AM AEST
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Yes, this is beautiful! Love oneself and love the journey.
-Elisabeth |
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Re: The Beautiful World of Eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 01:49:45 PM AEST
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::this is beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Beautiful World of Eyes
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 02:29:44 PM AEST
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| very deeply and beautifully expressed. magnificent! I only wish I could write like this. love it! |
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Re: The Beautiful World of Eyes
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 12:04:00 AM AEST
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You don't play Bloodborne do you?
Are you lining your brain with eyes?
I don't want to see any Great Ones!
This is an interesting poem from that point of view. |
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