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The Rhapsody of Bohemia
Contributed by
xHeathenx
on
Sunday, 21st June 2015 @ 08:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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(The song of inspiration: www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ar7nVbjAsEw)
-The Rhapsody of Bohemia-
We have been held captive
By the rhapsody of Bohemia
It calls forth, pulling us along
As we perform our tight-walk,
High upon life's fraying strings
We shed solemn tears
Rainfall to water fledgling crops
Tokens of our yesterdays
Hoping to see the future
For just once upon our time
We escape our prison through catharsis
Numb the pain of ever-lasting present
And we will purge transgressions
Shed ourselves of sin and its indigestion
And together, we will transcend this world anew
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Re: The Rhapsody of Bohemia
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by speedy on
Monday, 22nd June 2015 @ 06:00:34 PM AEST
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Good write.
Hannah B |
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Re: The Rhapsody of Bohemia
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by Elisabeth on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2015 @ 09:19:14 AM AEST
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So, I listened to the song first. It reminds of an awakening, as does this poem. I really like your style. Beautiful poem!
-Elisabeth |
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Re: The Rhapsody of Bohemia
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 01:48:12 PM AEST
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sorry i'm late, this is beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Rhapsody of Bohemia
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 06:46:04 AM AEST
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Very deep and intense
The last line makes it for me! |
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Re: The Rhapsody of Bohemia
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by Archie on
Friday, 4th September 2015 @ 02:18:46 AM AEST
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I take back my last comment.
'Everything survives in its changed form'
Leto Atredies
'Children of Dune'
Let me know when you run for office
I will vote for you. |
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