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My Life Would Be So Much Better
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Saturday, 20th June 2015 @ 07:45:56 PM in AEST
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My life would be so much better if you hadn't become sick and died.
You were a wonderful person because love was what you supplied.
My life would be so much better if you had gotten well.
But you died in the hospital and life became pure hell.
My life would be so much better if you were still around.
I wish I could still hear your voice because it was such a beautiful sound.
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randyjohnson
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2015-06-20 19:45:56]
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Re: My Life Would Be So Much Better
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by speedy on
Sunday, 21st June 2015 @ 02:16:48 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: My Life Would Be So Much Better
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 08:22:07 AM AEST
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| Truly sorry for your loss |
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