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Take it away
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Monday, 8th June 2015 @ 03:48:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don't know what I did to deserve this pain
But since I was a kid its been in my brain
Most people say that I'm just insane
But all I ever wanted was to feel the same
I haven't ever asked for much
Just to have someone to touch
Who will never hold a grudge
And not treat me like I'm sludge
I'm not asking for a lot
And I give it all I got
But you want to see me rot
All alone and just forgot
I don't know what else to say
I'm not loved in any way
No one cares if I decay
So won't you take it all away
Won't you take it all away?
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2015-06-08 03:48:59]
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Re: Take it away
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 8th June 2015 @ 07:54:58 AM AEST
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Terrific angst
Get out and about and wash away the fear.....
Nice work!
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Re: Take it away
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by CandyAnn on
Monday, 8th June 2015 @ 06:35:20 PM AEST
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| This is a very touchy poem :/ |
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Re: Take it away
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 9th June 2015 @ 08:13:58 AM AEST
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Great write.
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