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Honestly Struggling
Contributed by
senates
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Wednesday, 3rd June 2015 @ 01:56:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Crawling pass my pathetic existence,
Never looking back at the subsistence,
Every time I've looked
Hope always seems to laugh at me,
As I gaze at darkness.
Demon hands caress my feelings,
Trying to understand the layers that are pealing,
Don't bother the effort,
That knowledge was never meant to be,
Rely on no one.
Emotions overtake when the bells start ringing,
Ripples through the water send me seething,
The violent calm was the only thing I've breathed,
Subtle suffocation.
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senates
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2015-06-03 01:56:26]
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Re: Honestly Struggling
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by thezenmonkey on
Wednesday, 3rd June 2015 @ 11:26:24 AM AEST
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this made for nice reading
"the violent calm" i feel i know what that means
and that's a good way to put it! |
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Re: Honestly Struggling
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st June 2015 @ 08:25:29 PM AEST
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| I hate that I like dark poetry so much. But you do it well so it lessens the guilt |
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