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Loose Leaf
Contributed by
Baby`Fallen`angel
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Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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All this is,
is a tangled mass of lines and curves
all that I feel
is written in words
It all seems so pointless
looking at the paper now
when what I'm thinking
can be read on my brow
these letters that form words and thoughts
are abstract in their meaning
the confusion that makes sense
with what I see as real
a blank page covered in worries
a mind filled up with blank pages
a book without a cover
a story without a song
Copyright ©
Baby`Fallen`angel
... [
2003-05-28 02:05:00]
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Re: Loose Leaf
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 02:44:38 AM AEST
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My dear,
There have been times, so many times in my life when I felt the dispair and hopelessness that I feel when I read your poem.
You are very talented to be so honest with yourself and others also. Honesty with one's self can pull you our ot anything, no matter how futile it all seems, so go one writing your words, this time include some dreams.
Lovingcritters
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Re: Loose Leaf
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 02:45:19 AM AEST
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My dear,
There have been times, so many times in my life when I felt the dispair and hopelessness that I feel when I read your poem.
You are very talented to be so honest with yourself and others also. Honesty with one's self can pull you out ot anything, no matter how futile it all seems, so go one writing your words, this time include some dreams.
Lovingcritters
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