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wither and wane
Contributed by
Jigget
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Sunday, 31st May 2015 @ 11:00:28 AM in AEST
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wither and wane
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homicidal moon, suicidal sun
one that shouldn't be,
one staring at a gun.
one that bleeds and that one
feeds the other one...
one will watch it burn,
one will wane and wither.
one.
run from the moon,
fly into the sun.
don't ever look back
or the stars become undone...
run as if you can't see believing anyone.
everyone is leaving.
the deceiving days?
they're done...
done for. dying...dead.
the dark, it fades. the dawn has won.
yet down the footsteps fall,
the endless walk breaks into a run.
away the whispers wander,
choking on those withered tongues
while the homicidal moon mourns
the suicidal sun.
JD Howell
5-31-2015
Copyright ©
Jigget
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2015-05-31 11:00:28]
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Re: wither and wane
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by thezenmonkey on
Sunday, 31st May 2015 @ 11:29:22 AM AEST
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seriously brilliant
i just learnt a catchy new song?! |
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Re: wither and wane
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 31st May 2015 @ 02:06:07 PM AEST
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Amazing poetry, so full of life and superb imagery. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and feel inspired to write something as juicy as this piece. Wonderful!
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Re: wither and wane
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by softerware on
Sunday, 31st May 2015 @ 09:01:59 PM AEST
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well done! Lots of energy and drive in this story! A quick read, but one that begs to be read again!
Love the musical quality enhanced by reading it out loud as you suggest.
Wish we had some music to go with it!
softerware
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Re: wither and wane
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by bigj on
Monday, 1st June 2015 @ 02:34:39 AM AEST
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| was completely captivated while reading this. beautifully worded. amazing. |
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Re: wither and wane
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 9th August 2015 @ 07:15:30 AM AEST
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As usual with you...another ass-kicker.
such talent.........
Invierno |
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Re: wither and wane
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by ming on
Monday, 14th December 2015 @ 07:26:43 PM AEST
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This is freaking cool! You have the gift.
ming |
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