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Thoughts of You
Contributed by
crmnlilbruno
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Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 02:23:02 AM in AEST
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You are a wonderful person that is no doubt
Completely beautiful inside and out
You make me smile and giggle each time I see you
All of the above you and I know is true
You speak with pure honesty never with a lie
Making each time I spend with you harder to say goodbye
Skin so soft with the touch of my hand
Something no man could could of possibly planned
Smile so bright it cannot be ignored
With you there's no way one could be bored
Always something you do or something you say
That makes me think of you at the wake of each day
Making my days better with just a simple text
Makes me wonder what is in store for me next
You hold your stuffed rabbit softly against your face
Even watching you do this my heart picks up pace
You have turned a bad day into the best
Need not to explain that day to the rest
Aaron D. Carman
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2015-05-29 02:23:02]
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Re: Thoughts of You
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 09:17:55 AM AEST
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Dude, you posted TWO poems with the incorrect use of "right" in your author's note. I didn't even read this poem as a result of that unfortunate oversight.
Are you a writer or a righter ?
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Re: Thoughts of You
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by thezenmonkey on
Sunday, 31st May 2015 @ 07:22:49 AM AEST
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i did read the poem
its a good poem |
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