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Middle age
Contributed by
Kimmy79
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Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 12:49:56 PM in AEST
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I look in the mirror
And notice my fading looks
Should I go under the knife
Get a little "nip and tuck?"
I know my face has changed
Over time
"Oh what a bummer
another fine line"
I made heads turn
In my hey- day
Now men seem to look
The other way
Wish I could go back in time
When I was pretty and flirty
I think we should all stop ageing
When we hit thirty
Life is like a book
It's not finished till the last page
My life is a new chapter
As I head for middle age.
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Kimmy79
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2015-05-24 12:49:56]
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Re: Middle age
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by speedy on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 03:38:39 PM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Middle age
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 06:43:49 PM AEST
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| Unfortunate we vilify ageing and only highlight the superficial aspects such as fading of looks but forget the wisdom and dignity that should accompany it. I guess ageing is worse when you age alone as opposed to ageing with someone. It reminds me of a poem I wrote called autumn blossom. Embrace the ageing my friend and impart the wisdom on the youth |
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Re: Middle age
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 07:12:17 PM AEST
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You're a spring chicken.
Funny we wrote about the same thing.
My poem should make you feel better.
Chin up and feel great............. |
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Re: Middle age
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by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 13th June 2015 @ 01:58:46 PM AEST
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| nice write..like your frankness |
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