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Ouroboros
Contributed by
tin
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Saturday, 23rd May 2015 @ 08:07:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm lost inside the blank space in my mind
Fumbling at rounded edges that tell me nothing; leads me no where
Searching for reason at its places of past respite
Unable to move from past to my multi hued futures
Within this numbed state I spied a path; where it went I knew not
With withheld glee and reminiscence I traversed expectantly
Looking forward to all I was sure was waiting
Looking forward to that feeling of wholeness
But with all the energy spent on hope
And reminiscence of wholeness and joy back when
All fragmented upon the realization
That this path has only lead me
Where I've always been
Copyright ©
tin
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2015-05-23 20:07:07]
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Re: Ouroboros
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 02:28:55 AM AEST
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you're there tin
later than
like a roll of film
that is over exposed
just waiting for a new
moment to yearn
along for an old dog
in the moon
all you need is a good
storm to blow by
all you need
is already here
I really love this writing tin,
it could go on, and should
Well done!
Peace! |
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Re: Ouroboros
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 08:32:53 AM AEST
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When confusion meets clarity.
Best,
Fox |
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Re: Ouroboros
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 06:47:40 PM AEST
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| It describes my present state very eloquently. I really like this poem. |
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