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Contributed by
irisblue
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Saturday, 23rd May 2015 @ 06:24:06 PM in AEST
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I will see you again in the sun swept fields
where the music plays and the angels sing
where we are all brand new
flying high above the flutter of doves wings
where we walk hand and hand and dance by star light
where we all rejoice and laugh
basking in his glory majestic, beautiful and bright
so it is never goodbye, but I will see you again
as we walk hand and hand in the sun swept fields.
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Re: again
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 23rd May 2015 @ 07:15:15 PM AEST
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Beautiful
God Bless you both!
What a Gem. |
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Re: again
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by karoody on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 01:26:50 AM AEST
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Beautiful write and a very unique and loving way to express your feelings
Blessings to you and yours
Kara |
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Re: again
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 04:35:35 AM AEST
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yes, beautiful write! I guess we know why if we've felt love.
such grand elation / beauty!
Peace! |
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Re: again
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 07:48:40 AM AEST
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I'm not sure everyone is getting this poem, exactly, but knowing what your family and you have gone through, I do.
Firstly, I've read it a few times now and was blown away by how amazingly beautiful it is and especially to bring yourself together enough to muster up a fantastic write like this. Seriously, it is awesome.
Secondly, knowing the pain you over came to write it is impressive. I am so glad to know that you know you will one day see him again...hopefully a very long time from now!
This induced so much emotion in me, tears & the ol' lump in the throat, yet, a calmness and smiles with such extraordinary & stunning beauty...like his heaven.
I am beyond impressed, yet so sorry for the reason you were inspired to write this piece.
*huge hug* & God bless you & family.
He rests with God's angels.
Love,
Teim |
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Re: again
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by speedy on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 11:20:48 AM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: again
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 09:52:44 PM AEST
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truly beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: again
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st June 2015 @ 01:01:55 PM AEST
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where we are all brand new
I so love that line! So, so, profound.
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Re: again
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 08:35:50 PM AEST
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| This is absolutely beautiful!! |
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Re: again
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th June 2015 @ 03:25:47 PM AEST
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| An extremely touching dedication to your dad. May you meet again, walking hand and hand by starlight, and in the sun swept fields. |
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Re: again
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 03:32:50 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful dedication. I'm sorry for your loss.
My Dad is everything to me, and that made this hard to read.
All the best.
~Scorp |
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 26th July 2015 @ 10:44:12 AM AEST
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A magical hope and view. I pray you are correct. Super job on visual brush strokes with words for pigment.
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: again
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 07:19:33 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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