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After the wave
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Saturday, 16th May 2015 @ 11:46:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I hope you enjoyed
The rise
The crest
And the fall
Because everything good has to end
After all
Waves, like years
Come and go
In a flash
In a split second
Our future joins our past
Coming in
The water rises
Who will we be?
Going out
The water recedes
Who were we?
So as you look back
After the wave
Take who you were
And who you are
And you'll be made
Copyright ©
Beyfoxman5
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2015-05-16 11:46:19]
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Re: After the wave
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by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 16th May 2015 @ 02:19:38 PM AEST
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| nice..short and succinct! |
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Re: After the wave
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 16th May 2015 @ 07:18:00 PM AEST
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Well crafted, Fox. I like the last three lines espcially.
Invierno |
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Re: After the wave
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by speedy on
Saturday, 16th May 2015 @ 08:24:01 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: After the wave
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by softerware on
Sunday, 17th May 2015 @ 12:40:47 PM AEST
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I may never look at the ocean the same way again!
This is a clever analogy! Well done!
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Re: After the wave
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 04:40:49 PM AEST
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i love your waves analogy of life, beautiful poem!
hugs n' love nessa |
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