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The Artist
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winniss
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Wednesday, 6th May 2015 @ 06:37:12 PM in AEST
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Covered in years,
forgotten by time.
I’ve painted a life
in my mind.
winniss, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit.
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winniss
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2015-05-06 18:37:12]
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Re: The Artist
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 8th May 2015 @ 01:37:09 PM AEST
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And I hope your life comes pouring out in your words.
Best,
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Re: The Artist
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by softerware on
Saturday, 9th May 2015 @ 10:36:34 PM AEST
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Some see art, some see chaos, some see reality, some make their own. The artist always has colors to make the mundane lovely, the ugly vauge, and the rain into a sunset.
You can speak art as well as paint it; how talented you are!
Share your gift--keep writing.
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Re: The Artist
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 03:50:53 PM AEST
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I guess it's an okay poem. I would have liked to see you elaborate more on that mind.
So, I have a question for you. Why is it that you apparently only know how to write poems, but not read them?
I shall quote a good YPDC buddy:
"You may think you are the world's gift to poetry but most likely you are not because if all you care about is your own writes then you're missing the big picture."
How about instead of just coming here to post your maximum poems a day, without commenting, put some of that time aside and read/comment on some of our other talented poets here at ol' YPDC. It's not winniss.com! There is talent a plenty here.
Could you imagine if we were all like this, just posting poems like you do and not reading them, how messed up is that? It doesn't make sense to simply write but not read and share your thoughts.
It's selfish.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: The Artist
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by Lionel on
Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 09:34:51 PM AEST
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| Thought provoking, though short, right on point. |
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Re: The Artist
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 12th May 2015 @ 07:49:02 PM AEST
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A short and sweet message that reminds us of the fact that life in the sense of interpretation and understanding is relative perspective and imagination. It's unfortunate that you don't illustrate(pun intended) what art you see, think, and can potentially create. I have a poem myself called "The Artist", which I would ask you read.
Also, as Tim said, we're a community here, that's what the site is here for. Take part with us, and join for some sharing of love for writing. :) |
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Re: The Artist
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by desciple on
Thursday, 21st May 2015 @ 05:58:03 PM AEST
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| straight, forward and to the point. I like it...good write |
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