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looney as a toon
Contributed by
LadyDama
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Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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i知 crazy
looney as a toon
i知 inconsistent
listen to me croon
i知 anal
you can do nothing right
i知 eccentric
come one, let痴 fight
i知 mean
i値l break you with pain
i知 unfeeling
don稚 care about the rain
i知 selfish
don稚 give a damn
i知 petty
please don稚 eat my jam
i知 all these things
and a couple more too
and i know this
all thanks to you
may 10, 2003
Copyright ﾂｩ
LadyDama
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2003-05-27 20:35:00]
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Re: looney as a toon
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by sideshowrunaway on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 01:12:32 AM AEST
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"and I know this
all thanks to you"
I thought this was really cute, because it just shows how critical people can be and how all the little insecurities we have are all thanks to the jackasses in our lives :) keep writing
sarah |
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Re: looney as a toon
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by UnleashedFuture on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 01:28:38 AM AEST
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| There's always someone willing to tell us just what our downfalls are. Very nice. The last line made me laugh. |
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Re: looney as a toon
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:05:23 AM AEST
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| I don't worry.. because I know what my friend is...this poem is a variety JAM..i will steal and eat..hehe. venkat |
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Re: looney as a toon
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 03:22:50 AM AEST
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Gettin' stuck in fast I see
Michele's back for all to see
complete with excentricity
Suddenly the day's less black
sunlight shinning through a crack
aint it nice to have her back |
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Re: looney as a toon
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:34:29 AM AEST
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Wow Michele, you went right to the point here with this poem. I enjoyed reading this and its very true!! Someone can always manage to tell you what they think without a care to any pain words cn inflict.
For ( a broken bone in time will heal, a hurtful word in time can kill)
Michelle |
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