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Fathoming where I am
Contributed by
omnisci
on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2015 @ 01:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Witnessing the duet of my heart and mind,
Unsure of lines that separates the two,
I stand here fathoming where I am!
Amused by the foolish deeds of my heart,
Shivered by the devious ways of my mind,
I stand here fathoming where I am!
As one must ride and learn horse
And stay as the master of the animal,
As one must ride to his destination
And not be too indulged in the riding,
And so when riding my mind and my heart
when they overwhelm the me within,
I unmount the horse time to time
As I did just now and therefore
I stand here fathoming where I am!
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Re: Fathoming where I am
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2015 @ 07:38:21 PM AEST (User
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Nice easy rocking gait on this one..reminds me of a show tune lyric: "Stop the world, I want to get off".
Your lyric has a pleasant daydreamy swing, drawing us along your journey and folding in a lesson for coping with the overwhelming stuff of life, long before we realize it!
Well done, omnisci. Enjoyed this very much!
softerware
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