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Little girl pt. 3
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Tuesday, 21st April 2015 @ 08:21:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Little girl of eighteen
Had a love so deep that it could be seen
Everyone told her to keep her love to herself
But she didnt want her love to be kept on the shelf
She wanted her love to grow kingsized,
Not to be pushed over way to the side
She wanted a man she could be herself with
And not to fall deep down into the abyss
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2015-04-21 08:21:12]
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Re: Little girl pt. 3
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 21st April 2015 @ 08:51:55 AM AEST
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I hope she found great love and not abyss.Nicely written.
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Re: Little girl pt. 3
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 12:59:03 PM AEST
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Cool stuff...quite a jump from 5 or 6 to 18. What about all those intervening years?
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