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We as Humanity
Contributed by
code-addresse
on
Monday, 20th April 2015 @ 11:56:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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HUMANS
We Believe
We Believe in Equality
We Believe in Changing the World
We Believe in Thinking and Analyzing
We Say
We Say Peace
We Say Respect
We Say Love
We Talk
We Talk about Responsibility
We Talk about Hope
We Talk about Strength
We Believe Say and Talk
As If We are Advanced
But are Aren't
We are Only in OUR FANTASIES
Because of the Outside
WE ARE HUMAN
Humans
That Believe but Don't Apply
That Say but Don't do
That Talk but Don't Follow Through
We All live in Fantasies of . . .
What WE COULD BE
BUT
WE ARE HUMAN
HUMANS WHO BELIEVE, SAY, AND TALK
BUT DON'T APPLY, DO AND FOLLOW THROUGH
WE ARE THE SPECIES GIVEN A BRAIN
WE CALL OUR SELF ADVANCED
BUT WE ARE PRIMITIVE
SOON TO FADE AWAY
ORGANISMS THAT LIVE FANTASY
AND DREAM REALITY
But All We Are is Human
Humans Stuck In Insanity
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2015-04-20 23:56:38]
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Re: We as Humanity
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2015 @ 08:37:32 AM AEST
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| A very interesting take on the human condition. Well thought out with a message to all. Very nice write, P |
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Re: We as Humanity
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by xHeathenx on
Saturday, 25th April 2015 @ 04:33:46 PM AEST
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Minor typos, and it kind of seems chant-like in the beginning, like a mantra.
I like this, but my complaint is while there is a great degree of truth, I see it as an oversimplification, and misconception on some levels. I think that the human condition as represented here is merely out of a sake of convenience. The media is bought. Messages are false and subliminal. News is entertainment. Information distorted and journalism subdued. That is a great part of the horrible sad state of our society today. |
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